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You shuffled quickly to your next class here whispers as you passed.

“She’s fat.” One whisper reached your ear

“She’s a loner, a loser!” another line of many reached your ears.

It pained you to know that these very lines also took away your best-friend, Alfred F. Jones.
Now he was just like the rest of them, a bully, someone who wanted to hurt you, both emotionally, and physically.

Then, you saw your classroom door. “I can make it!” You though happily before being shoved out of the way by none other than, Alfred.

You landed on the ground harshly, hearing some snickers around you. Alfred already entered but his friends, Gilbert and Matthais, were pointing and laughing, only making you feel worse.

The bell rung and you got up hurriedly not wanting to be late for class again because of thes three. But that didn’t happen. Instead you got a pissed off teacher leacturing you after class.

~timeskip~

You got home ok, but your heart was crushed.

You rushed up to your bedroom, ignoring your parents’ warm welcome home, and stared sobbing.

After a few minutes of crying and you notice a picture of you and Alfred when you were younger on your nightstand.

You sniffled and picked it up remembering this moment.

---------Flashback------

“______!!!” Alfred called.

You looked over to him and smiled a cheesy smile.

“Yes, Alfred?” You asked, walking over to him.

He patted the spot next to him. “Come sit with me.” He said

You giggled like the child you were. “OK~!” You said as you plopped down next to him.

“Hey, ____.” He said suddenly.

“Hmm?” you hummed and looked at him curiously

“Promise me, that we’ll always be the best of friends.” He said looking at you with a warm smile, your cheeks turning a little pink. “With me being the hero of course!” he added quickly with his obnoxious but contagious laugh. You giggled along with him.

“I promise, Alfred.” You promised with that special little pinky of yours.


---------End of flashback---------

You laughed half-heartily as a tear slid down your cheek. The picture of you making that promise with Alfred was very special to you.

You cried even more when you realized that he broke his promise. By becoming the worst bully you ever imagined.

You sat on your bed, and wept silently a little bit more.

~~~~~~~~~~~Over to our Special little Bully~~~~~~~~~~~~

Alfred was pacing back and forth in his room running his hands through his hair.

“Why did you hurt her again?” and “You should be ashamed of yourself.” Were the thoughts that were running through his head and have been ever since he broke the promise you guys made when at age 12.

He flopped down on to his bed with a grunt. He actually liked you, no like was an understatement, he loved you. But he had a reputation to keep; he can’t be in love with the lame, unpopular girl…

Can he?

He didn't think you were lame though. He thought you were beautiful, kind, generous, and smart.

He looked up a little to see the picture of you guys making the promise that was now broken. He gave a huge sigh before drifting off to sleep.

-----back to you------

~another timeskip brought to you by flying mint bunny~

You woke up with a yawn.

Then you paused. “Did I cry myself to sleep?” you asked yourself quietly. You shook the thought off and got ready for school.

You brushed your (h/l) (h/c) hair till it was to your satisfactory. You didn't bother to put any make-up on.

You went downstairs and had a piece of toast, then walked to school since it wasn't that far away.

Once you reached school you saw a familiar face already there, and that face belonged to none other than Alfred.

You froze and stiffened up. You didn't know what to do but then you saw another person, Arthur Kirkland, his stepbrother, and also a close friend.

They were talking, so you decided to listen in.

“What’s more important? Your reputation or, her feelings?” You heard Arthur ask Alfred.

There was a silence

You stiffened up.  Were they talking about you? No they couldn't be.

“Hello there, love.” Arthur said.

You squeaked and jumped a tiny but, turning slowly to face the two.

“How long have you been there?” he asked

“I just got here.” You lied softly, avoiding his gaze.

“But I do have a question for Alfred.” You stated, a little more confident.

Alfred looked at you with a shocked glare. “What is it, dude?” he asked coldly.

“what happened to our promise?” you asked, trying to keep your eye contact.

SMACK!

Your eyes went wide and tears pricked the edges of your eyes. A visible slap mark forming “You’re no hero…” you mumbled. Then, you turned around and started running away from the two of them.

‘You’re no hero.’ Those words hit Alfred like a punch in the face, especially since it was coming from you.

That’s when he decided what was more important.

You were the most important thing in his life.

“______, wait!” he called.

You only ran faster, but Alfred caught up to you quickly and caught your wrists.

“Let me go!” you cried, struggling out of his grip.

“No, not again.” He mumbled to you wiping a stray tear off of your face.

You looked up at him with red, puffy, confused, and sad eyes. “What?” you asked quietly

“I will never let you go again.” He said pressing his lips against yours before you could say anything. You stiffened a little, but melted all the same.

He pulled away looking into your (e/c) eyes and pushed back a strand of your hair. “Look, _____. I know I betrayed you, hurt you, and crushed you, but I did it all for popularity, I never really meant it, and, I’m sorry. All I ask is for another chance. Not just as a friends, but as something more.” He said gripping your hands tightly.

You chuckled and happy tears came dripping off your face.

“Yes. Yes I would love that.” You said, giving a nice long bear hug. “Just promise me this.”

He looked at you curiously.

“Promise me you will never leave my side again.” You mumbled.

He smiled a soft warm smile.  “I promise.” He said

You guys lived the rest of your lives happily, never breaking that promise.
:iconwthplz: what the hell did i just write?

ah well. I hope you guys enjoy this (hopefully) emotional story.

picture does not belong to me
hetalia does not belong to me either

You: :iconamericasparklesplz:
story: :iconhetafan123:

enjoy~!
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:iconluvluvhurts:
LuvLuvHurts Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Too cliche!! Sorry for being rude but I don't like this story. That's all I can say.
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fabiha1 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2015
Me: Alfred 
Alfred: yea fabiha
me: BYe motherfucker matties better *goes to mattie and hugs him*
Matthew: i love you too fabiha
Alfred: wait wut just happend
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:iconkillerkitty809:
killerkitty809 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BEAT FUCKING SHIT OUT OF HIM HE HAS NO RIGHT TO HIT A LADY!!!
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:iconanimeliv12514:
animeliv12514 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015
My thoughts exactly ! XD 
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:iconkillerkitty809:
killerkitty809 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay
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:iconquintessence04:
Quintessence04 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
A lot of people in the comments are saying that it's not realistic how Reader forgave Alfred almost instantly, and things like that. But as someone who's sadly fallen into doing something wrong for popularity and watched others do the same(luckily it lasted only about half an hour), I can say that if it isn't who you are, then there's something in your eyes that people can see afterwards. There's just some guilt back there that you can see, to tell wether or not they meant it, and once you find that guilt, that's all you can see. A good person who was corrupted by a thirst for popularity, a thirst to be like everyone else and essentially be 'accepted'. When you see all that, it's understandable to want to forgive someone, and to follow through on that act of forgiveness. So it really is realistic. I respect everyone else's opinions, this is just mine. Thank you for your time. :)
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:iconhetafan123:
hetafan123 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015
Yes! This is what I was thinking when I wrote it! I was starting to worry about this story with so much negativity from the readers it got.
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:iconquintessence04:
Quintessence04 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! :iconclappingplz: I love it when I understand people and their thoughts! :D
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:iconhetafan123:
hetafan123 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015
Yay!
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Skypaw222 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree with you
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:iconangelofrpg94:
AngelofRPG94 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
. . . the story is good but... It could have been better, like for example the reader not forgiving straight away but they talk/argue until the agree to start over? This is just my opinion but it is good
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SoulFireDemon Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I wish readerchan ditched him and crushed Alfie for hurting her QAQ
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:iconmatchmakingdove1028:
matchmakingdove1028 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahaha! I would've never forgiven him the moment he started trying to bully me. I mean, if we got this far just to be ruined by your reputation, then you were never my real friend. CIAO BITCH! I wouldn't even bother paying attention, crying, or talking to that bitch. :D

I just love how people don't forgive Alfred either, hahaha~
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:iconkitkatkatelyn:
KitkatKatelyn Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015
I was just thinking the same thing. I'd be all like FUCK YOU then leave.
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:iconmatchmakingdove1028:
matchmakingdove1028 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know right? :iconfuckyoubyeplz:

Pffft- :icondatassplz: bitch please, I'm waaaay too awesome to even be affected by a weakling like you  Artimist -Deal with it / Bad ass / like a boss
Such a weakling, seriously. Giving up your friendship for popularity? Damn you're retarded!
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:iconladymarblekiller:
LadyMarbleKiller Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
I'LL BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND AFTER I SEND YOU TO HELL.    C:
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:iconhetalian-potato:
Hetalian-Potato Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I'll be your girlfriend once I cut off your balls,tourture you and chop off your limbs,so it'll be fair n' square
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:iconkyurito:
Kyurito Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Do it!
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:iconlucarioniteofaph:
lucarioniteofAPH Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Student General Artist
...AFter I kick your balls, cut you and torment you, I'll be your girlfriend.

Equality for everyone!
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:iconhetalovergirl:
What?
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:iconhetalovergirl:
hetalovergirl Featured By Owner May 25, 2015
THIS.
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:iconlucarioniteofaph:
lucarioniteofAPH Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Student General Artist
"THIS."
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:icona-yesha:
A-yesha Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  Student Artist
KAWAII!!!! <---- sounds like an old retarded man .-.
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:iconaemham:
Aemham Featured By Owner May 17, 2015
I read the beginning and for some reason this came to mind:
I was walking into the class with a happy smile on my face, and my arms over my head happily.
And then Al kicks me and I faceplant into the ground, just as I get into the room.
Smack on the ground.
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Othelle Featured By Owner May 10, 2015
O/////O
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:iconsuperwholocklife:
superwholocklife Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry but if he were the one to physically lay hand to me there is NO WAY I would ever want to hand out with him again.
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Edited Apr 18, 2015
Is it bad that instead, I would have kicked him in the balls, laugh in his face, and then start loving on Canada...?
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:iconangelofrpg94:
AngelofRPG94 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I would not blame you at all, I wanted to call Johnny Gat and have him do what he likes to the asshole!
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015
Or I would call Iris Heart and let her do what she wants~
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:iconangelofrpg94:
AngelofRPG94 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Either way, just call some who is badass! XD
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015
Pretty much! XD
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:iconangelofrpg94:
AngelofRPG94 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep, time to go badass! Minda is a badass Neko Emoji-25 (Cool) [V2] naruto gif  Madara  Uchiha 
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015
Yeppy!Plutia Angry Icon 
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:iconangelofrpg94:
AngelofRPG94 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Wahahahahahaha! Ichigo Hollow Gif Natsu - Dragon force Levidoingthething Gohan (Teleport) [V1] Luffy OP Icon 23 
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:iconkitkatkatelyn:
KitkatKatelyn Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015
Thumbs up
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:iconcinnamon-badass:
Cinnamon-Badass Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
Eh, I wouldn't blame you. xD
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
Who  could...? He's been an a**hole
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:iconcinnamon-badass:
Cinnamon-Badass Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
Boom
Read my mind
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
Everyone's thinking that.
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secretk11 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015
Me:*Runs to Natalya* Hey Guess what?
Belarus: What?
Me:Alfred slept with Ivan
Belarus:*speeds off with knife*
Me: HE LIKED IT TOO *smiles*
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:iconhetalovergirl:
hetalovergirl Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
I like the way you think! *is laughing my butt off*
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
She should cut his balls off. I would GLADLY help.
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:iconbluebirdy180:
bluebirdy180 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015
Awwwwww sooooo cheeeeessssssssssssyyyyyyyyyyyy
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:iconbigthinkz546:
bigthinkz546 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015
Jacksepticeye: smack? It should be WAPSH!!! Jack High Five Jack High Five Jack High Five Jack High Five Jack High Five 
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:icontheeapollo:
TheeApollo Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015
After that slap it was over!!!!
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
It was over WAY before that slap for me.
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Cartoonsdreamgal Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Alfred: I love you
Me: BITCH F*CK NO YO ASS JUST SLAPPED ME AND YOU REALLY EXPECT ME TO FORGIVE YOU? COME ON BITCH DON'T YOU HAVE TO BEAT UP BATMAN OR SOMETHING YA SKANK VILLIAN! *Slaps so hard* *Then kisses cuz nobody can resist Alfreds sexyness*
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chasitythewolf Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Alfred-I love you...
Me-Oh HEEEEELL no.*slaps him* You've been making my life miserible dipshit! What am I supposed to do? *fake giggle* Oh, Alfie, please let me be your abused wife! No.*walks over to Arthur*
Arthur-Wow....
Me-Ikr?
Ivan-Become one with mother Russia, da?
Me-*jumps into his arms* Da!
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ToriOfTheFangirls Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015  Student General Artist
Can we fund this and make it a movie somehow?! XDDD
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:iconchasitythewolf:
chasitythewolf Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
See how beautiful that comment was? There are comments that should be turned into movies. And with one dollar a day, you can make this a reality! XD
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