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You shuffled quickly to your next class here whispers as you passed.

“She’s fat.” One whisper reached your ear

“She’s a loner, a loser!” another line of many reached your ears.

It pained you to know that these very lines also took away your best-friend, Alfred F. Jones.
Now he was just like the rest of them, a bully, someone who wanted to hurt you, both emotionally, and physically.

Then, you saw your classroom door. “I can make it!” You though happily before being shoved out of the way by none other than, Alfred.

You landed on the ground harshly, hearing some snickers around you. Alfred already entered but his friends, Gilbert and Matthais, were pointing and laughing, only making you feel worse.

The bell rung and you got up hurriedly not wanting to be late for class again because of thes three. But that didn’t happen. Instead you got a pissed off teacher leacturing you after class.

~timeskip~

You got home ok, but your heart was crushed.

You rushed up to your bedroom, ignoring your parents’ warm welcome home, and stared sobbing.

After a few minutes of crying and you notice a picture of you and Alfred when you were younger on your nightstand.

You sniffled and picked it up remembering this moment.

---------Flashback------

“______!!!” Alfred called.

You looked over to him and smiled a cheesy smile.

“Yes, Alfred?” You asked, walking over to him.

He patted the spot next to him. “Come sit with me.” He said

You giggled like the child you were. “OK~!” You said as you plopped down next to him.

“Hey, ____.” He said suddenly.

“Hmm?” you hummed and looked at him curiously

“Promise me, that we’ll always be the best of friends.” He said looking at you with a warm smile, your cheeks turning a little pink. “With me being the hero of course!” he added quickly with his obnoxious but contagious laugh. You giggled along with him.

“I promise, Alfred.” You promised with that special little pinky of yours.


---------End of flashback---------

You laughed half-heartily as a tear slid down your cheek. The picture of you making that promise with Alfred was very special to you.

You cried even more when you realized that he broke his promise. By becoming the worst bully you ever imagined.

You sat on your bed, and wept silently a little bit more.

~~~~~~~~~~~Over to our Special little Bully~~~~~~~~~~~~

Alfred was pacing back and forth in his room running his hands through his hair.

“Why did you hurt her again?” and “You should be ashamed of yourself.” Were the thoughts that were running through his head and have been ever since he broke the promise you guys made when at age 12.

He flopped down on to his bed with a grunt. He actually liked you, no like was an understatement, he loved you. But he had a reputation to keep; he can’t be in love with the lame, unpopular girl…

Can he?

He didn't think you were lame though. He thought you were beautiful, kind, generous, and smart.

He looked up a little to see the picture of you guys making the promise that was now broken. He gave a huge sigh before drifting off to sleep.

-----back to you------

~another timeskip brought to you by flying mint bunny~

You woke up with a yawn.

Then you paused. “Did I cry myself to sleep?” you asked yourself quietly. You shook the thought off and got ready for school.

You brushed your (h/l) (h/c) hair till it was to your satisfactory. You didn't bother to put any make-up on.

You went downstairs and had a piece of toast, then walked to school since it wasn't that far away.

Once you reached school you saw a familiar face already there, and that face belonged to none other than Alfred.

You froze and stiffened up. You didn't know what to do but then you saw another person, Arthur Kirkland, his stepbrother, and also a close friend.

They were talking, so you decided to listen in.

“What’s more important? Your reputation or, her feelings?” You heard Arthur ask Alfred.

There was a silence

You stiffened up.  Were they talking about you? No they couldn't be.

“Hello there, love.” Arthur said.

You squeaked and jumped a tiny but, turning slowly to face the two.

“How long have you been there?” he asked

“I just got here.” You lied softly, avoiding his gaze.

“But I do have a question for Alfred.” You stated, a little more confident.

Alfred looked at you with a shocked glare. “What is it, dude?” he asked coldly.

“what happened to our promise?” you asked, trying to keep your eye contact.

SMACK!

Your eyes went wide and tears pricked the edges of your eyes. A visible slap mark forming “You’re no hero…” you mumbled. Then, you turned around and started running away from the two of them.

‘You’re no hero.’ Those words hit Alfred like a punch in the face, especially since it was coming from you.

That’s when he decided what was more important.

You were the most important thing in his life.

“______, wait!” he called.

You only ran faster, but Alfred caught up to you quickly and caught your wrists.

“Let me go!” you cried, struggling out of his grip.

“No, not again.” He mumbled to you wiping a stray tear off of your face.

You looked up at him with red, puffy, confused, and sad eyes. “What?” you asked quietly

“I will never let you go again.” He said pressing his lips against yours before you could say anything. You stiffened a little, but melted all the same.

He pulled away looking into your (e/c) eyes and pushed back a strand of your hair. “Look, _____. I know I betrayed you, hurt you, and crushed you, but I did it all for popularity, I never really meant it, and, I’m sorry. All I ask is for another chance. Not just as a friends, but as something more.” He said gripping your hands tightly.

You chuckled and happy tears came dripping off your face.

“Yes. Yes I would love that.” You said, giving a nice long bear hug. “Just promise me this.”

He looked at you curiously.

“Promise me you will never leave my side again.” You mumbled.

He smiled a soft warm smile.  “I promise.” He said

You guys lived the rest of your lives happily, never breaking that promise.
:iconwthplz: what the hell did i just write?

ah well. I hope you guys enjoy this (hopefully) emotional story.

picture does not belong to me
hetalia does not belong to me either

You: :iconamericasparklesplz:
story: :iconhetafan123:

enjoy~!
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Edited Apr 18, 2015
Is it bad that instead, I would have kicked him in the balls, laugh in his face, and then start loving on Canada...?
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secretk11 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015
Me:*Runs to Natalya* Hey Guess what?
Belarus: What?
Me:Alfred slept with Ivan
Belarus:*speeds off with knife*
Me: HE LIKED IT TOO *smiles*
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
She should cut his balls off. I would GLADLY help.
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:iconbluebirdy180:
bluebirdy180 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  New member
Awwwwww sooooo cheeeeessssssssssssyyyyyyyyyyyy
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:iconbigthinkz546:
bigthinkz546 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  New member
Jacksepticeye: smack? It should be WAPSH!!! Jack High Five Jack High Five Jack High Five Jack High Five Jack High Five 
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:icontheeapollo:
TheeApollo Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015
After that slap it was over!!!!
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
It was over WAY before that slap for me.
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:iconcartoonsdreamgal:
Cartoonsdreamgal Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Alfred: I love you
Me: BITCH F*CK NO YO ASS JUST SLAPPED ME AND YOU REALLY EXPECT ME TO FORGIVE YOU? COME ON BITCH DON'T YOU HAVE TO BEAT UP BATMAN OR SOMETHING YA SKANK VILLIAN! *Slaps so hard* *Then kisses cuz nobody can resist Alfreds sexyness*
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:iconchasitythewolf:
chasitythewolf Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015
Alfred-I love you...
Me-Oh HEEEEELL no.*slaps him* You've been making my life miserible dipshit! What am I supposed to do? *fake giggle* Oh, Alfie, please let me be your abused wife! No.*walks over to Arthur*
Arthur-Wow....
Me-Ikr?
Ivan-Become one with mother Russia, da?
Me-*jumps into his arms* Da!
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:iconunfair-anne:
Unfair-Anne Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
That would've been me in that situation XD
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:icononiirinsama23:
oniirinsama23 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015
If I were to decide how that ended,instead of becoming friends with him,imma punch him in his face!
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015
Damn right!!!!! I'd kick him between the legs!!!!
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:icononiirinsama23:
oniirinsama23 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015
i did that to my classmate once...damn hilarous.
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
I bet it was... that also happened in my gym class... poor guy never saw it coming...
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:icononiirinsama23:
oniirinsama23 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015
i always wondered...what it was like to do that....but now i did...YOLO!!
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
Yep~ It's not bad~ It's funny~
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:icononiirinsama23:
oniirinsama23 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015
IKR!!!! xD
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:iconhanatagami:
Hanatagami Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
I wonder... can I "accidentally" kick my bully in the balls and not get in trouble....
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MikiKakaku Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015  New member
YAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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nyannyan1111 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  New member Student Filmographer
america broke his promise:brokenheart: :brokenheart: :brokenheart: :brokenheart: :brokenheart: Repairing Heart Avatar Broken Heart Emote Broken Heart Emote Broken Heart Emote :heartbroke: :heartbroke: :heartbroke: Broken Heart - Emote Broken Heart - Emote Broken Heart - Emote Healing Heart Emote Healing Heart Emote Healing Heart Emote Healing Heart Emote Healing Heart Emote Healing Heart Emote Healing Heart Emote 
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:iconaquaaradia:
AquaAradia Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
STILL GONNA BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF YOU AMERICA
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:iconporcelain-child:
Porcelain-child Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015
Okay, firstly: if that little fucker slapped me I would cut his hand off and deep fry it. Second: if he started flirting with me afterwards id punch him so fucking hard his head would explode on impact.
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LilianVantas Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Student Artist
Heh, he wouldn't be able to flirt anyway. you/me/reader would have snapped his neck before he did.



^J^




Kolkolkolkol...
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:iconporcelain-child:
Porcelain-child Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015
true dat my soul sibling! :iconhellyeahplz:
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:iconlilianvantas:
LilianVantas Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Student Artist
Lol XD
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:iconporcelain-child:
Porcelain-child Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
preach it!
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Digital Artist
DID HE JUST SLAP ME?! Boy u don't slap me!!! 
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:iconbloodpaw221:
Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 10, 2015  Student Artist
O-O calm down pls... You slapped him he didnt slap you... I think i got confused reading that part
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:iconbloodpaw221:
Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Student Artist
O-O calm down pls... You slapped him he didnt slap you...
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Student Filmographer
And next thing you know america brakes his promise again...-.-
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Just sit back and watch as it happens 5 mins later.
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Filmographer
wow..xD
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Hey,it's his fault if he ends up in a graveyard!
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Filmographer
Ok ok calm down o.o;
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Digital Artist
It not me,it DA cra reader XD
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Student Filmographer
:L
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Student Digital Artist
:3 hey,the reader is crazy,I'm insane if I get a knife, there's a differ :33
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KristenTheManatee Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
WHAT!? he should of ATLEAST been neutered in the most painful way possible before she forgave dat lil American idiot
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:iconbaconwizard85:
baconwizard85 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Student Writer
Would I be considered heartless if I didn't forgive him.... I'm stubborn...
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Student Filmographer
Me too ° ú °
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Student Filmographer
Nu.You wont at all..
Its perfectly fine in my brain ^3^
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:iconbaconwizard85:
baconwizard85 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Student Writer
Yay! At least I'm not the only one who thinks this way because my emotions do not shift that way Flippin' Tables 
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Student Filmographer
(I replied in the wrong place ._.)
Ik it takes me alot to convince to me for me to say 'its ok'
OuO
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:iconbaconwizard85:
baconwizard85 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Student Writer
(nawh it's alright :3)
Yea ikr it takes forever for someone to get my trust back ^w^
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Student Filmographer
yey i found my twin ^^
XD
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:iconbaconwizard85:
baconwizard85 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Student Writer
I FOUND ALL MAI TWINZ >:3
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Student Filmographer
lel
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s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
Shit I gots slapped.....da feeling doe.....I enjoyed reading this
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AoTLover345 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014   Digital Artist
-holds heart- The feelings ;^; Great story bruh great story ;-;
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:icontrollingtontrollifer:
I would have been WAY more harsh. Like,"I'm sorry, I'm waiting for a guy who WANTS to be with me!" "Not a PATHETIC, Low-down ,VILLAIN like YOU!"
But, that's why I don't write love stories. You did good bro! Love 'dem' 'feels'! 
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