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“Are you alright?” Another voice asks.

You turned around you couldn’t believe what you saw.

Wait, wait. This was the only cabin by this lake, there is no way another person, an handsome young man at that, would be in the lake at this time of night. Since you didn’t know what to say, you observed him closer. He had blond hair, with icy, intimidating blue eyes. You felt something hit your legs, and it didn’t feel like another pair of legs, It was a tail, an orange one at that, that seemed to be connected to the person in the water.

You tensed up and opened your mouth to scream, but he quickly covered your mouth.

“Don’t. Scream.” He said, It seemed strict and firm, but it seemed to crack just a tiny bit.

After a while, your tense body relaxed a little, causing the merman to slowly let go of you.

The silence seemed to get to you though. “My name is _____.” You said suddenly, your face going below the surface, but quickly coming back up, wiping away the hair in your face.

He glanced at you. Man, was his stare intimidating.

Then, there was silence.

“Ludwig...” He said “My name is Ludwig.”

You give him a small smile, then a small yawn escaped your lips. “Hey, it’s getting late, and I have to go before my parents notice.” You said, slowly swimming to the dock.

But just as you said it, you hear your mom call; “______?”

You quickly climb up and whisper to him with a smile, “See you tomorrow~!” Then you rushed off to your mother.

Ludwig hid in a spot where he could keep an eye on you, but no one could see him.

“___, your all wet...” He heard you mother say. “What happened?” She asked.

“Well...” You were thinking of a lie, while Ludwig was eyeing you suspiciously. Gosh, how could you even feel his stare?! “I was playing before it got dark, but then I got too close to the edge of the dock, so I fell in, then it got to this.” You let out a nervous chuckle, complete with a nervous smile.

Your mom gave you a stare of disbelief, but shook it all off. “Well, lets get you dried off and something warm to drink.” She said, ushering you inside the cabin.

Once you were both inside, Ludwig looked off in your direction, surprised you didn’t give your meeting with him away.

“____...” The name rolled off his tongue addictingly. “Fits her perfectly.” He said before diving into the lake below him.

~*timeskip*~

The both of you have been meeting each other secretly each day after you met. Then of course, you both fell for eachother. Cheesy, right? But you were certainly not complaining.

This day was like the rest of them. You go meet him like every other day, but you had news this time.

“Hallo, ___.” Ludwig greeted you as you sat on the dock.

You smiled at him weakly. “Hi, Ludwig.” You said, though a hint of disappointment swam in your voice.

Ludwig seemed to notice it.”What's wrong, fraulein?” He asked.

You looked up at him, sadness filling your eyes. “We’re leaving tomorrow.” You muttered quietly. Loud enough for Ludwig to hear though.

Ludwig felt his heart shatter into a million peices, and then those million pieces into a million more. So in other words, the news devastated him. “Oh.” He responded lamley, slicking back his tamed hair.

“I’m sorry.” You said, before you rushed off. Tears brimming your eyes once you turned around. You wouldn’t let him see you in this state. It would make you seem weak... right?

You wept in your pillow. You didn’t want to leave him. Not in the slightest bit. You seemed to cry yourself to sleep after a few minutes

Little did you know, Ludwig didn’t want you to leave either. So he was going to do, what he thought could make you happy. So he swam to the deepest part of the lake.

~*Timeskip*~

You awoke to a bright light. Not sunlight, a bright light. You were curious, so why not check out this mysterious, blinding light? You look around the house to see if anything was the source of the light, but there was nothing. You looked out front, Your parents car was gone. They must’ve been startled by the light and left quickly.

Then finally, You look out to the lake. The light was coming from a certain spot in the lake, looked like a more deeper part of the lake. Then, the light goes out and a figure emerges at the top, floating to the shore, it doesn’t fall in and drown. You immediately run out to see what the figure was.

Once you reach the shore, your eyes widen in shock to see the familiar face of Ludwig. Except this time, he had a pair of legs... and was nude... and hot with his hair in his face.

A-Anyways, you lifted his arm over your shoulder and drag him back to the cabin, to get him warm and dry.

~* baby timeskip*~

You sat by the guest be where Ludwig rested. You dressed him in a male black tank top and some cargo pants that your father left behind. They seem to fit pretty nicely too.

You stared at him, letting your (e/c) eyes wonder his body. He was well built. Probably a strong man. You slowly grasp his hand. It was so warm and soft, you didn’t want to let go of it.

But, Ludwig chooses that moment to wake up, causing you to flinch back immediately, letting go of his hand.

Ludwig flutters his icy eyes open slowly, still groggy from sleep. He groans as he gets up, and then looks in your direction. Slowly remembering everything that happens, his eyes widen and he hugs on to you tightly.

Your cheeks brighten at the action, but you hugged him back, taking in his scent and warmth he gave off.

“____, Please don’t go.” He begged. You have never, in the time you have known him, heard him beg for anything. “I don’t want you to leave. Ich liebe dich, _____. Too much to let you go away”

You blushed a darker shade of red upon hearing that. One, that was out of character. Two, he loved you back, You squeezed him a little tighter. “I-I love you too, Ludwig...” You whisper back shyly.

Ludwig was so overwhelmed by happiness, he didn’t think of his next move.

So of course you were gonna be off guard when he kissed you. You immediately kissed back though. The kiss was sweet and gentle, but full of love the two of you shared. But the goddamn air pulls you apart.

You pant lightly while looking into Ludwig’s blue eyes, as he caressed your cheek gently, Pushing a lock of your (h/l) (h/c) hair behind your ear, smiling gently.

“Hey, Ludwig...”

“Hm?”

“Do you know how to walk yet?”
THE NEXT ONE IS FINALLY HERE! :iconfinallyplz:

sorry for the long wait for this guys. I couldn't figure out what to write for this for a while.... and then my computer crashed... and now i'm posting this at 2 in the morning.

so anyways, I hope you enjoyed.

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Story (c) hetafan123 [me]
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:iconalexandra-dark:
ALEXANDRA-DARK Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015
Do you know how to walk yet?-----i must really know how to spoil the mood
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Meowhug17 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Student Filmographer
Gee thanks mom and dad your lucky it was just Ludwig and the light didn't destroy me......
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kittygirl303 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015
xD That Last Line Doe
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goddesskid Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  New member
'Do you know how to walk yet?' Yeah. LOL
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kittygirl303 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
Yup
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goddesskid Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  New member
I literally cracked up at that point.
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:iconkittygirl303:
kittygirl303 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
Yeah that happened to me too
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DragoShadowing Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Student Writer
Yeah mum and dad, just leave me here to fend for myself...
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queenofbadassea Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  New member
the awesomeness
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Lol XD baby-steps!!!
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ILuvAnimeSK Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Um, my parents left me.....
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Digital Artist
( hugs u ) I'm sorry! :<
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Pink1398 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
And the parents of the year award goes to..... 
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:iconnumbers3:
numbers3 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
the parents who abandoned me in a lake cabin because of a light! *clapping*
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:iconvaradrake:
VaraDrake Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Did reader-chan's parents up and leave her?... Well that's cruel
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:iconmomokurosaki:
momokurosaki Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
Haha his hair in his face got a-anyways that made me laugh xD
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BloodoftheTitan1 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is you after 5 days::stayawake: 

And this is Luddy after 5 days::chairdance: Jumping Trampoline fun Soupicide RUNSIES :BombingEscape: run animation Pie Glomp Revamped HasperJasper Choo Choo Express Entry Put your fingers in the air :funnydance: Dancing :la: Happy Dance Disco Coffee Dance - Updated 
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momokurosaki Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
0.0
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BloodoftheTitan1 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
By you I mean the Reader.Germany (Disappointed) [V2] Germany's Plan [V5] Germany (Shy) [V5] Germany (Hunter) [V3] Germany and Austria (Irritated) [V5] Germany (Worried) [V4] Germany (Not Impressed) [V4] Germany (Reading and Annoyed) [V4] Germany (Argues) [V4] Germany (Pitiful) [V4] 
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momokurosaki Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Oh.....
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:iconbloodofthetitan1:
BloodoftheTitan1 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry for the misunderstanding...................... heres an "Im sorry" presentHologram Emote 
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momokurosaki Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Oh no it's okay ^_^ don't feel bad or anything
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BloodoftheTitan1 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, thanks!Ice Dragon 
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:iconmomokurosaki:
momokurosaki Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
It's no problem ^_^ I like your picture of miku it's so cute ^w^
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kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
i will teach him to walk!!
*goes and teaches Luddy how to walk. he laughs and starts walking faster. then he starts jogging, then running, then sprinting*
*le after a few weeks* now i can't get him to stop moving!! "looks outside. Luddy is now running and jumping for training (which is fun for him)*
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InsaneNikki Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love the picture. He's like "Ahh, so sexy."
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PickleQueenOfNinjas Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
There should be a sequel where he has to learn how to walk.
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leone3600 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
Should make a small mini story of reader Chan teaching Ludwig how to walk :P 
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PinkieTheAnimePerson Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
FJFHJDJYDVHVUFHCJVASHFHJC YUSH I LUV YOU LUDDY!!
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seerofheros Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
If he doesn't...oh god we have to help him to the bathroom :iconnosebleedplz:
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BlueWolfhanyou Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
awwww
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Devils-Enemy Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student General Artist

so what the f**k happened to the parents (sorry about language

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Fortheloveofchaos Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
maybe reader chan is old enough to have her own car? 
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Devils-Enemy Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student General Artist
kk 
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LeeAyna-Abadeer Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student
Right on my thirteenth birthday too. 
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AngelXofXDreams Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student Artist
Dat ending XD
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BunnyUtonium Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student General Artist

 

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jackobear2000 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The feels! Help! I need a tissue to solve this issue! Ill 
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sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
*gives tissue* haha feels haha
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theendblue211 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Please write another one they r so good please continue =)
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109144 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Omg. Loved this.:3
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TheBTTownME Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
I love telling people i love them in German! It freaks them out so much! I love i the story so cute!!
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shadowXtikalfan Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Hahah awesome! Is there going to be a Sweden one?
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inushomarugama Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow the story was awesome
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hetafan123 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Thank you~!
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inushomarugama Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome!
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LinksHetalianSheikah Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

^-^ This was cute~! And that last line...XD Oh, wow; brilliance, right there. ((And I'm not trying to be sarcastic at all, I'm being honest))

 

Keep it up~!

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hetafan123 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Thank you. An OOC German though  
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LinksHetalianSheikah Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^-^ You're welcome~ Please, never stop writi--eeeer...Typing! ^^; ((Seriously, what DO you say when on the computer? Because we're typing, not writing, but yet...I don't even know *shakes head*)) Who cares? It was adorable~!
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hetafan123 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
XD yep, typing. Oh, I'm getting a new phone soon. (meaning i'll be able to text in a little bit)
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